An Incident when I was caught in a storm

Name: Muhd Hafiz Class: 2E2
Date:12/2/08
Draft 2
An Incident when I was caught in a storm Thunder boomed in the distance, I stared at the sky where big cauliflower clouds were boiling up, soaking us wet with showers that pierced through our skin. The boat was swinging from left to right continuously.
We struggle for anything that was on the ship to cover us. Even if we found a long sheet of cloth we were soon saturated. We were shivering because of the coldness. I was finding poles to erect a strong shelter for us both. The storm suddenly eased, hoping that it would not come again. The storm was hideous and furious. We soon landed on the ground.