An Incident when I was caught in a storm

Name: Muhd Hafiz Class: 2E2
Date:12/2/08
Draft 2
An Incident when I was caught in a storm Thunder boomed in the distance, I stared at the sky where big cauliflower clouds were boiling up, soaking us wet with showers that pierced through our skin. The boat was swinging from left to right continuously.
We struggle for anything that was on the ship to cover us. Even if we found a long sheet of cloth we were soon saturated. We were shivering because of the coldness. I was finding poles to erect a strong shelter for us both. The storm suddenly eased, hoping that it would not come again. The storm was hideous and furious. We soon landed on the ground.

Confession of Altophobic

Name: Muhd Hafiz
Class: 2E2
Draft 2
Title: Confession of Altophobic
I was hanging from the edge of a 6 metres building .It all started with climbing old walls, abandoned buildings, and tall fences. At that time, I dared my friends and brothers, but this time, they tried to dare me to climb the 6 metres building. Accepting the challenge was a bad idea. I was then waiting at the foot of the building with very grassy walls. The whistle was blown and I started climbing, searching for cracks and grips. Suddenly, the edge that I was gripping on broke and I fell. Luckily, there was another edge which was near and I quickly gripped it. I call for help because I was terrified. The firefighters came and help me down with a ladder.